Comments on: Not Just Another Plot

By: Frank James Davis

Frank James Davis — Wed, 27 Jan 2010 17:39:13 +0000

My criticism of Mark’s story is based on what the average reader might envision, or reasonably believe–not what “anyone who’s anyone in Key West” might know. Unfortunately, unlike Thom, I am not privileged to rub shoulders with Key West’s upper crust. In that regard, though, I am like most people who experienced this story. To us, since we have not the time, inclination or means to research Mark’s story, we read it as a piece of fiction. In the world of fiction, “plausibility” is crucial. (Of course, truth is often notoriously stranger than fiction.)
Since Thom had nothing caustic to say about my assessment of Roslyn’s personality, I assume he agrees with me.
Mark Howell is a very talented writer who has the ability to elicit emotion. I’m glad I read his story. I’m sorry if my observations offended anyone. Can only call them as I see them. Good luck to both Mark and Thom!

By: Thom One

Thom One — Wed, 27 Jan 2010 16:29:52 +0000

Mark, it’s truly a wonderful story and should have taken top prize. Frank James Davis’ “critique” is hardly completely plausible given that he knows nothing– NOTHING– about how easy it is to get around in Key West and/or many of it’s notable attractions, to include the Hemingway House. Anyone who’s anyone in Key West knows the ins and outs of EVERYWHERE on the island. It’s very easy to be a critic (I should know, I’m doing it here now), but I digress. Our bet is on for the next competition, I’m looking forward to handing over five quid and a Grimness.

By: Frank James Davis

Frank James Davis — Tue, 26 Jan 2010 15:33:51 +0000

Correction: In my previous post, I, of course, meant “E.H.’s house.”

By: Frank James Davis

Frank James Davis — Tue, 26 Jan 2010 15:31:48 +0000

Well crafted, but hardly completely plausible. Roslyn is a 14-year-old girl with the knowledge, understanding and sensitivity of a far better-educated, far more worldly woman–to say nothing of the trio’s unlikely easy access to E.R.’s house and precious possessions.
I would characterize this tale as fantasy of the mundane.
Still, has a nice feel.

By: Deanna Schrayer

Deanna Schrayer — Sun, 24 Jan 2010 22:22:02 +0000

Lovely story. I’m so glad you chose to post this one on line. Thank you so much for sharing.

By: Mrs Lorraine Schmit

Mrs Lorraine Schmit — Thu, 21 Jan 2010 17:40:39 +0000

let me commet!

By: Mrs Lorraine Schmit

Mrs Lorraine Schmit — Thu, 21 Jan 2010 17:39:46 +0000

Print the final five entries and let your readers select the top one.

By: Mrs Lorraine Schmit

Mrs Lorraine Schmit — Thu, 21 Jan 2010 17:38:26 +0000

loved ” Just Another Plot” I thought it far superior to your star pick of “Lazarus”
It moved along very well and a delight to read. So glad I took the time to read it on the internet . Maybe I would have also liked your third, fourth or fifth choice too.
In fact, why don’ t you just leave it up to your readers to pick the final top selection next time.