Comments on: Death and Ms. FitzSimons

By: Barbara Wheeler

Barbara Wheeler — Wed, 11 Jan 2012 19:42:23 +0000

Very good, quick moving story, Marc, with a charming ending. I actually got chills up my arms. Thanks and keep writing.
Barb

By: Marc Cameron

Marc Cameron — Sat, 07 Jan 2012 01:55:56 +0000

Thank you all for the kind comments. Writing is a solitary business–and I appreciate the feedback.

By: RICK HARRISON

RICK HARRISON — Thu, 29 Dec 2011 20:53:53 +0000

MARC,
GREAT STORY AND VERY SUCCINCT AT PROVIDING ONE WITH THE COURAGE TO STRUGGLE ON WHILE KNOWING THAT THIS JOURNEY IS TRANSITORY AT BEST! LOOK FORWARD TO READING OTHER ITEMS OF YOUR WORK.
RICK

By: Tyson

Tyson — Thu, 22 Dec 2011 00:54:42 +0000

A redhead.. Who would have thought.

By: LaVonia Olson

LaVonia Olson — Thu, 15 Dec 2011 19:16:27 +0000

Very well written. Thank you for the enjoyment in my day home sick in bed.

By: Perry Alaska

Perry Alaska — Tue, 13 Dec 2011 07:03:28 +0000

Kinda reminds me of a community out here called, Marshall. Where men are strong, the women beautiful and the kids…… Well written Marc. Would be glad to read more.

By: larry

larry — Sun, 11 Dec 2011 11:06:25 +0000

beautiful story brought tears to my eyes

By: Wayne Weidner

Wayne Weidner — Sun, 11 Dec 2011 04:17:07 +0000

Charlie’s death will have to wait, but what a quiet way to go, that is if you really have too!!

By: elizabeth valenzuela

elizabeth valenzuela — Sun, 11 Dec 2011 00:03:37 +0000

Very well written. I was full of emotion along with Charlie since I have shared his position in life. Could not stop reading and was happy to have him back with his wife at the end when he really needed her.

By: Cheryl Pierson

Cheryl Pierson — Fri, 09 Dec 2011 17:16:28 +0000

Marc, what a lovely story! I enjoyed it very much. You packed a lot into this short story.